By: E Morehouse

E Morehouse
Mon, 05 May 2014 14:42:46 +0000

Who edits these stories? Why is the lead such a mess? This is a significant story.

The lead should be simply, “The chief investment officer of Ohio State is leaving the university over differences with school officials. Jonathan Hook, who has been CIO since joining the university in 2008, is leaving to join…..

And Geoff Chatas’ title is OSU Chief Financial Officer…what the hell is the title you included for him?

This is basic stuff. The lead should be simple and straight forward.