By: Anonymous

Anonymous
Wed, 25 Mar 2015 14:04:45 +0000

Right off the bat, from the headline, you can tell this article is going to be lacking.

“May Session could see changes, will not be free next year”

Not being free is a major change. May session WILL see major changes; by saying it “could” you introduce… confusion.

In fact, the lead of the story doesn’t need to include a reference to other possible changes. That can come in the text of the story.